Black Heart

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I have everything to say, but i cannot speak
Like everything I say is on flip of a coin
With all I do, I realise my false acceptance
into a false society I never wanted to join

My soul is hollow
My life is hollow
My world is hollow
But my black heart is full

What i once counted as the truth
is now accountable for the lies
My own irrevocable heart of black
I hear the never easing cries

My soul is hollow
My life is hollow
My world is hollow
But my black heart is full

I point my finger at the finger pointers
i eschew the present, as i did the past
I live in fear of future
Every breath I take, I take as my last

My soul is hollow
My life is hollow
My world is hollow
But my black heart is full

We always look back to "the good old days"
never thinking about bad things were
I can think about my future
But all I can see is you

My soul is hollow
My life is hollow
My world is hollow
But my black heart is full

you are the darkness, and i am your slave
i await your desire, at your back and call
I long for the daylight to beam into your life
Just in time for the dagger to finally fall

My soul is yours
My life is blue
My world is pensive
But my black heart, I pledge to u...



evo jedna obradjena pesma...tj deo ove pesme je na srpskom,moja ortakinja je napisala par redova jednom na casu i ja rekoh da je zavrsimi, ja sam to preradio na engleski i napisao ostatak...neznam da li trebam da je stavim u nase pesme, jer to ipak nije moja, jer je najbitnija idej a i pocetak.
ona je napisala predposlednji deo na srpskom i jos 2-3 nasumicne recenice...i ja rekoh da ne propadne...

Dopuna: 01 Okt 2005 22:56

//offtopic
Preporucio bih vam da ako pisete pesme na engleskom da ne objavljujete na stranim sajtovima i forumima jer ce to samo da prisvoje...

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za ovu pesmu bi trebalo napisati ziku, i dati nekom bandu da otpeva.
svidja mi se

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Hmmmm, nije losa pesma. Ali generalno, veoma mracan osvrt na svet.
Pretpostavljam da je nezadovoljna jako zbog necega i da to pokazuje u pesmama...
Ipak, slazem se sa Fej - ovo bi bilo zanimljivo kada bi neko obradio.

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e ewo, trazio sam te delove na srpskom ali nisam mogao da nadjem gde sam ih stavio...ewo koje je delove ona napisala

With all I do, I realise my false acceptance
into a false society I never wanted to join

My soul is hollow
My life is hollow

I can think about my future
But all I can see is you

you are the darkness, and i am your slave -ova recenica je bila posvecena meni, iz sale naravno

i pokusao sam da pisem na srpskom ali mi nesto ne ide...

Dopuna: 02 Okt 2005 13:04

i da inace imam jos jednu ne dovrsenu, samo moju ali ona je isto ovako mracna